I think that what you typed was actually very logical. However, consider this, suppose you were to write a awesome title? I mean, I don't wish to tell you how to run your blog, but suppose you added a headline to possibly get people's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little boring. You should peek at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create article headlines to grab people to open the links. You might try adding a video or a related picture or two to get people interested about what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it could make your posts a little livelier.